Audience Feedback Results

1. What do you think the story is in our video?
- Relationships
-After a break up
-A guy who is missing his ex-girlfriend
-A boy got dumped and he wants her back
-A boy trying to get back with his girlfriend
-Broken up
-A love story
-He broke up with his girlfriend
-He broke up with his girlfriend
-Singing about a girl he broke up with and singing about how much he misses her
-Break up
-He misses the girl he loves
-Man has broken up with his girlfriend
-Breaking up, missing someone
-Someone who misses his girlfriend, broken up and wants her back
-About a boy thinking about a girl
-A guy misses a girl
-Love story
-Love story
-Love story
-A boy and a girl have broken up and he misses her
-Broke up with his lady
-Someone remembering an ex girlfriend
-A couple split up
-People breaking up
-A guy recovering from a break up
-Remembering he misses
-A break down of a relationship, him regretting his behavior
-Two people who are in love but split up and he misses her
-Two people brake up and he is remembering the relationship
-Waiting for someone
-A break up
-A love story, break even
-Losing someone you love
-A love story
-A break up
-Break up
-Couple splitting up singer misses her
-Realtionship
-A break up in a relationship
-Love
-The main guy misses his girlfriend
-Love story ended


2. Would you say this is an 'authentic' indie video?
- yes
- yes
- yes, could have more monotone scenes
- yeah, i like the use of moving photographs and indie objects
- yes, it's very good
- yes
- not sure
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes, becuase of the style of the shots and the artists sunglasses
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- no
- yes
- yes
- not particulairy
- yes as he is a single artist, has a unique casual look etc
- there's no such thing. 'Indie' is a pretense
- no, not at all, couldn't be less, note honey by swim deep, most indie video ever
- yes
- yes
- yeah
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes, simple video
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes, though I would replace the camera blur with a moody lens filter
- to an extent
- yes
- it's the desired elements
- yes

3. What is effective about our video?

-The relationship between the boy and the girl is very realistic
-You can tell which bits are flashbacks and the still shots which build up
-The camera shots are really good, I like the variety and it fits well in the video
-The editing - how the room changed but the singer didn't move
-The bit where all the stuff appears around Jack in the wooden place
-The freezing of character and changing things around him
-Great camera work, imaginative, clear
-Sets a good mood
-Camera work, flash backs, editing
-The camera work, flash backs, editing
-Focuses on artist and other shots fit on what the lyrics say
How its edited, ripping up the photo
-The blurry shots, sped up picture frames
He's wearing a hat
-Scenes showing Jack and the story, the snap between
-The effect of time passing in shots
-Visual effects - photo, reflections
-The memories that are shown to remind him of his girlfriend
-The way it shows the pair together
-Use of outdoors, film shots
-Blurry/out of focus shots
The cutting and editing is subtle so you can get into it
-The use of still images after one another
-The variety of camera angles and flashbacks helps to tell the story
-Video effects
-Good love theme
-The use of flashbacks
-Good effects, very like a story
-Ripping and building of picture and things appearing in room
-Shots of guitarist highlight that it's a music video
-Singing/miming looks authentic
-The use of different effects
-Using different focuses and the stop motion
-The flashback shots
-Moving pictures
-Jack just sitting on his own with a guitar singing a sad song
-Returning to the original guitar shot
-The use of the pictures, reflects back to his past
-Going back to flashbacks (the park)
-Showing the two different moods
-The things adding to the walls at the start, close up on hands
-The video on the tree, the opening paper at the start
-It is original and relatable
-The still picture shots
-The pictures ripping photo, the editing is good
-All the different adds of setting looked sick
-The visual effects
-It's original and the effects are good
-Visual effects
-Editing + photos
-The blurry shots and the video on the tree, the contrast between Jack and his guitar and the story with Rubie
-Finishes how it starts in the cabin
-Change in the shots and angles
-Different effects
-Liked the moving photo effect
-Stop motion

4. How would you improve it?
-less scenes of boy playing guitar, more scenery
-sometimes not in sync
-the lip sync is a bit out
-more monotone scenes
-i wouldn't
-it's really good
-i wouldn't
-no need
-better lighting in the shots of jack, more shed
-i wouldn't
-the ending
-shots on top of shots were confusing
-i wouldn't
-sync of voice
-take away some of the video effects. other than that nothing else need's to be improved
-less shots of jack
-some scenes seem to be awkward and not convincing enough
-miming could be improved
-the girl could star more in the video
-i'd probably change the beginging, maybe start with a flashback - how it used to be
-too blurry, the videos on top of each other
-i don't think it needs improvments
-i wouldn't
-the guitar matches the song
-get a different actor
-some editing at start is messy