Showing posts with label Evaluation. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Evaluation. Show all posts

Wednesday, 12 December 2012

Evaluation

Question 1: In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

As our chosen genre, being indie, has various rules of conformation of the genre such as performance of the band/artist or aspects of the video which subverts the typical mainstream conventions. However as indie stands for independent, the main convention with indie videos is the concept of being different and original in their attitude time music and the production of the music video. Throughout our video there is numerous examples of my group and I staying with the convention, developing the convention and challenging the convention. These three fields will now be discussed as followed:

Stayed with Convention
Performance: A clear way in which my group and I stayed with the convention of indie in our music video was in terms of performance of the artist. A main feature and focus throughout our video is the artist performing with an acoustic guitar. Various shots such as close ups, mid shots and high angle shots were used to accentuate and make clear the focus on the artist. The image on the left shows a particular close up shot we used during the music video. The inclusion of this shot visually highlights to the audience the artists skill with the acoustic guitar and how playing it is a big part of his music. Furthermore by having the artist playing in time with the song as well helps to give the impression that he wrote it and its his personal song. We made sure we conformed to this convention as the performance part of indie genre is a strict convention of indie videos as shown by our research from other indie bands music videos.
Mise-En-Scene: Another way in which we stayed with the genre conventions was in terms of the artists choice of Mise-En-Scene. Indie outfits are usually personal preference of the artist themselves. Generally their own clothes in which they feel comfortable in but, in addition to this, clothes which highlight their individual personality. As can be seen in the image, our artist wore skinny jeans in a khaki colour; skinny jeans are a frequent associated clothing item with indie artists as shown by our research and therefore we decided to conform to this convention. accompanied with the jeans, the Christmas jumper highlights his personality being seasonal and appreciative of vintage styled clothing; another convention of the indie genre. The over-sized beanie also represents how his clothing is affected by seasonal change.

Developed the Convention:
Camera: The convention of the indie genre in which my group and I developed was the conventional camera techniques and shot choices. To some extent we maintain with the conventional rules surrounding camera shots as we used a handheld camera in a few shots, more so whilst filming various symbolic props we had in our indoor location as we wanted the implication that the artist is looking at them himself and the audience are then seeing what the artist is supposedly seeing. However we developed this particular convention surrounding camera shots as we used another camera of better quality whilst filming performance shots as we wanted a clear cut image of the artist performing with his instrument. Furthermore, through building a character profile of our artist we have decided that he is an up-and-coming artist and therefore the use of an improved camera, filming more advanced shots such as close ups (which allowed us to generate Dyer's 'Star Power' which is a frequent aspect of indie videos), high angle and panning shots portrays a more professional approach to what the artist is doing and helps to create a more distinctive and clear perception of the artist.
Lighting: The indie convention was developed once again in our music video as although we stuck with using naturalistic lighting whilst filming outdoor scenes, particularly the memory scenes, we also used non-naturalistic lighting such as lamp lights or, in general, electricity whilst filming indoor scenes. We chose use non-naturalistic lighting whilst indoors instead of letting natural light flow through as it allowed us to create links to the lyrics within the song such as "lamp light" as well as because it allowed us to allow for different lighting variation within the shots which, in turn, allowed us to set the mood and tone. For example, we used the main lights within our indoor location and pointed them to the artist as it gave off a warm and appealing scenario which is another convention of the indie genre; music videos having a appealing ideal which the audience would possible like to experience. Furthermore at the start of the music video we wished to film a morning scene however the natural light was not bright enough and therefore we used subtle non-naturalistic lighting to allow for the artist to be seen yet portray a morning scene. The image below the bedroom scene in ours is taken from Ben Howard's video for 'Keep Your Head Up' which uses strictly naturalistic lighting throughout the video and it shows the progression from day to night. It does not use any non-naturalistic lighting which shows how we have developed this convention as our video uses both.


Challenged the Convention:
Narrative: Our music video challenged the conventions of a typical indie music video in terms of narrative as we had a heavy input of illustrative style narrative which meant that we had literal visual representation of the lyrics being described within our music video. Usually, indie videos use either a amplification style of narrative which involves the lyrics being represented in symbolic ways or they use a disjuncture style of narrative which means the narrative and lyrics show no relation. We chose to challenge the convention and stick with a more illustrative narrative style as it allowed us to step away from the indie genre and show originality when it comes to music videos produced by the artist. Our illustrative narrative style is shown when we showed a literal lamplight in the music video whilst the lyric "lamplight" was sung. Another example was were we showed the artist, during his performance, with picture frames around him which linked to the lyric "your pictures still hung up". Reasons for choosing a illustrative style narrative was due to the fact that although we wanted the audience to see the objects being described literally there is a possibility for the audience to then interpret the objects in a symbolic way and look for deeper meaning within the objects. The image below the lamplight is from One Night Only's video 'Say You Don't Want It' which is a typical indie video in terms of narrative as it uses various amplification techniques however mainly sticks to a disjunctive style which other traditional indie videos use.
Past And Present:
Usually indie videos show the day progressing from day to night as the video goes on however we decided to have the video having injections of the past when the artist is with his girlfriend and in the present he is alone and singing his song. From research we discovered that indie bands do not tend to include this feature as the idea of the artist having a relationship results in a less interest in female fans; especially as females are the main fan base as shown by our demographic research - http://willsonsmusicproductions.blogspot.co.uk/2012/09/lewis-watson-demographics.html The montage of shots overlaying each other shows the artist reflecting on the past and how its all the memories of him with the girlfriend are merged together. The Killers 'Smile Like You Mean It' video also challenges the idea of past vs present and we gained some inspiration from their video for the use of past and present in ours. However The Killers are classified as alternative rock and not particularly indie therefore this shows how we have looked into other genres of music other than indie.










Question 2: How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?
This question will be answered using a video which we created and edited on Final Cut Express, where my group and I discuss the effectiveness of our music video, digipack and magazine advert and how the three products link and work together to form an overall persona for our artist as well conforming to indie conventions. 


Question 3: What have you learnt from your audience feedback?


To gain audience feedback we played our video to a large selection of audience members aged 16-19 and gave them four questions to answer which can be seen below. We then collected in all the detail and noted down each response to each question which can be seen here: http://willsonsmusicproductions.blogspot.co.uk/2012/12/audience-feedback-results.html Once collected, I created a word cloud which allowed us to put all the responses in one place in order for us to see it in an abstract way but also, the main responses are enlarged to show the popularity of them and then the rest are sized accordingly to their popularity. 

What do you think the story is in our video?

Would you say this is an 'authentic' indie music video?



What is effective about our video?

How would you improve it?

Generally, from looking at the audience feedback, we gained a positive response and people really liked it. They spoke positively about our choice of costume, simplicity in terms of camera shots and the general narrative running through the video and they were able to identify that it was indeed about the singing reminiscing on a past relationship with the girl featured in our video. Furthermore, majority of responses agreed that it did look like an authentic indie video which was our desired outcome. However, by looking at the responses to the question 'How would you improve it?' the main improvements people would make would be the lip syncing which was expected as my group and I were unable to match the song with the artists singing perfectly. Therefore, next time we would make sure the actor singing would pronounce his words better in order to gain a more believable music video. Overall, people understood the narrative with the contrast between the present and past which we hoped for but instead suggested that there could have been more clips showing the past with the singing and girl together to emphasis that relationship even further. Also, we had a few suggestions that there should have been a flashback used at the very start of the video which, to me personally, would have been an effective approach to the video and would be a consideration if I were to film and edit the video again. There was also a few comments surrounding the use of stop motion within our video and some responses highlighted that it was confusing at times or they felt it was out of place. Although this is a valuable comment and if I were to edit again I would possibly see if the stop motion would have fitted in a different location within the music video better. However I believe it was a great addition and piece of editing and a convention which we challenged in the indie genre as stop motion did not seem to have a major focus on in other indie videos.
Overall, the audience feedback proved exceptionally helpful to us and we were able to gain constructive criticism which we took away with us and discussed as a group. If we were to edit and film again we would definitely considered the points and issued raised. 

Question 4: How did you use media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages?

I made a YouTube video to answer this question as I was able to talk about the vast and wide variety of technologies I used in the research and planning, production and editing of my music video, digipack and magazine advert. Each site we used had aided us greatly and proved to be extremely beneficial throughout our coursework; whether it was final express which hosted our editing of our music video or gmail which allowed us to maintain contact with each member or our group as well asking permission to use our chosen artists song. I also mention the cameras we used which allowed us to perform both handheld shots as well as various still shots if connected to a tripod. Overall, technology enabled my group and I to create the desired music video, digipack and magazine advert in which we hoped for.



Tuesday, 4 December 2012

Audience Feedback Results

1. What do you think the story is in our video?
- Relationships
-After a break up
-A guy who is missing his ex-girlfriend
-A boy got dumped and he wants her back
-A boy trying to get back with his girlfriend
-Broken up
-A love story
-He broke up with his girlfriend
-He broke up with his girlfriend
-Singing about a girl he broke up with and singing about how much he misses her
-Break up
-He misses the girl he loves
-Man has broken up with his girlfriend
-Breaking up, missing someone
-Someone who misses his girlfriend, broken up and wants her back
-About a boy thinking about a girl
-A guy misses a girl
-Love story
-Love story
-Love story
-A boy and a girl have broken up and he misses her
-Broke up with his lady
-Someone remembering an ex girlfriend
-A couple split up
-People breaking up
-A guy recovering from a break up
-Remembering he misses
-A break down of a relationship, him regretting his behavior
-Two people who are in love but split up and he misses her
-Two people brake up and he is remembering the relationship
-Waiting for someone
-A break up
-A love story, break even
-Losing someone you love
-A love story
-A break up
-Break up
-Couple splitting up singer misses her
-Realtionship
-A break up in a relationship
-Love
-The main guy misses his girlfriend
-Love story ended


2. Would you say this is an 'authentic' indie video?
- yes
- yes
- yes, could have more monotone scenes
- yeah, i like the use of moving photographs and indie objects
- yes, it's very good
- yes
- not sure
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes, becuase of the style of the shots and the artists sunglasses
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- no
- yes
- yes
- not particulairy
- yes as he is a single artist, has a unique casual look etc
- there's no such thing. 'Indie' is a pretense
- no, not at all, couldn't be less, note honey by swim deep, most indie video ever
- yes
- yes
- yeah
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes, simple video
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes
- yes, though I would replace the camera blur with a moody lens filter
- to an extent
- yes
- it's the desired elements
- yes

3. What is effective about our video?

-The relationship between the boy and the girl is very realistic
-You can tell which bits are flashbacks and the still shots which build up
-The camera shots are really good, I like the variety and it fits well in the video
-The editing - how the room changed but the singer didn't move
-The bit where all the stuff appears around Jack in the wooden place
-The freezing of character and changing things around him
-Great camera work, imaginative, clear
-Sets a good mood
-Camera work, flash backs, editing
-The camera work, flash backs, editing
-Focuses on artist and other shots fit on what the lyrics say
How its edited, ripping up the photo
-The blurry shots, sped up picture frames
He's wearing a hat
-Scenes showing Jack and the story, the snap between
-The effect of time passing in shots
-Visual effects - photo, reflections
-The memories that are shown to remind him of his girlfriend
-The way it shows the pair together
-Use of outdoors, film shots
-Blurry/out of focus shots
The cutting and editing is subtle so you can get into it
-The use of still images after one another
-The variety of camera angles and flashbacks helps to tell the story
-Video effects
-Good love theme
-The use of flashbacks
-Good effects, very like a story
-Ripping and building of picture and things appearing in room
-Shots of guitarist highlight that it's a music video
-Singing/miming looks authentic
-The use of different effects
-Using different focuses and the stop motion
-The flashback shots
-Moving pictures
-Jack just sitting on his own with a guitar singing a sad song
-Returning to the original guitar shot
-The use of the pictures, reflects back to his past
-Going back to flashbacks (the park)
-Showing the two different moods
-The things adding to the walls at the start, close up on hands
-The video on the tree, the opening paper at the start
-It is original and relatable
-The still picture shots
-The pictures ripping photo, the editing is good
-All the different adds of setting looked sick
-The visual effects
-It's original and the effects are good
-Visual effects
-Editing + photos
-The blurry shots and the video on the tree, the contrast between Jack and his guitar and the story with Rubie
-Finishes how it starts in the cabin
-Change in the shots and angles
-Different effects
-Liked the moving photo effect
-Stop motion

4. How would you improve it?
-less scenes of boy playing guitar, more scenery
-sometimes not in sync
-the lip sync is a bit out
-more monotone scenes
-i wouldn't
-it's really good
-i wouldn't
-no need
-better lighting in the shots of jack, more shed
-i wouldn't
-the ending
-shots on top of shots were confusing
-i wouldn't
-sync of voice
-take away some of the video effects. other than that nothing else need's to be improved
-less shots of jack
-some scenes seem to be awkward and not convincing enough
-miming could be improved
-the girl could star more in the video
-i'd probably change the beginging, maybe start with a flashback - how it used to be
-too blurry, the videos on top of each other
-i don't think it needs improvments
-i wouldn't
-the guitar matches the song
-get a different actor
-some editing at start is messy





Wednesday, 25 July 2012

Evaluation of Progress from AS to A2

Media was a completely new subject for me, something in which I have been interested in for many years yet rather knowledgeable in the subject; therefore I took the subject in order to expand my knowledge and gain more depth into what is media.
Preliminary AS
My first task was the preliminary task where we had to shoot a short proportion of a thriller opening which I would have to go to film later on. The preliminary was a great opportunity to practice some of the basic yet common shots which we would later on use in our real thriller opening. These shots included; matched cut, high/low angle shot, pan shot and close up. These shots made up the bases of the majority of our shots in the actual thriller opening. Below is my preliminary task from A2:

During this task I learnt not only how to perform certain shots but that location or setting is incredibly important when filming a film as it sets the mood and tone, adds to the tension as, for example, a forest has connotations of vulnerability and being alone. As you can see in my preliminary, location was something that I did not fully take into account when planning.
Another thing I learnt from the preliminary was that Mise En Scene also helps the audience empathise with a character (or not) and have a personal relationship with them (if the characters face is revealed and shown to the audience this would build a relationship whereas if they have a hood, as shown in the preliminary video, this relationship is harder to build).
However, overall, this preliminary, being my first time filming something like this, I thought it went well and opened my eyes to how hard and how much preparation and research goes into filming a thriller opening.
Preliminary A2
Being almost a year on since I filmed my first preliminary task, I have learnt valuable skills and sufficiently developed my technical side when dealing with; the camera and performing various camera shots; research and planning into location/ setting, time of day and weather; Mise En Scene within the shot which includes costume, props as well as lighting; and editing which is almost as important as the filming of the video as it, in my eyes, shows the true potential of the video. Below is my A2 preliminary task where we had to recreate a music video and we chose to do Ben Howard's Keep Your Head Up:


Personally, I thought my group and I did I really good job when filming this video as we put so much time into researching our chosen genre of indie and what the conventions of this entails such as an artistic approach to each video, being independent from other artists, heavy reliance on the instruments being used which are mainly a acoustic guitar and drums. We also researched various locations in our surrounding area to find the perfect and most like the original video. Furthermore we prepared for the video a lot more efficiently as we created a shot list which allowed us to follow the timing of the shots, the shot type used for example close up, pan or over the shoulder etc, and the Mise En Scene used in each shot all in comparison to the original video. Below is a picture of that sheet:
In comparison to my AS preliminary video, I felt that the execution in the shots performed was a lot sharper, precise and they were the perfect shots for the action going on and captured the actor and his actions clearly. Personally, I felt that each shot we did was the best shot and also, it matched the shots used in the original video. When doing the shots as well, they came out a lot more steady as I learnt that an unsteady shot not only loses marks but it just looks unprofessional. Time of day was an important factor to take into account in the filming of the video as the sun had to be setting whilst we filmed certain parts and I felt we caught the rays perfectly  in our shots.
However, I've learnt that for when we film the real music video, I would want to use less shots and hopefully get more block and longer shots as editing proved to take a rather long time as we had to editing each shot individually and they were very short shots indeed. Therefore, it was very time consuming when editing.


My Best and Worst Points
So far, in both my videos I have acted and been filmed; therefore I think that one of my strong points is the ability to act on camera. Another thing I think is my best quality is, is editing. I have always taken a lead role within editing the videos my group and I have produced and I feel like I have done a good job in doing so. Due to taking a leadership or captain style role in sports or other extra curriculum activities, I personally feel that I have used that skill whilst planning for the videos, editing and when we go out and actually film the videos.
However, as nobody's perfect I do have some bad points. What I've learnt from AS is that, despite me knowing many technical terms I fail to put them into my research and planning. Another bad point is that I need to be open various ideas when filming as I can be quite narrow minded whilst planning for an idea and therefore not take an idea and look at it from multiple different ideas.

What Have I learnt From Research and Planning
During AS I did not think research and planning was as important as my teachers made it out to be, however after doing it thoroughly for my A2 preliminary task I have found out just how useful it is. By researching my chosen genre of indie, I have found out that there is so much to be learnt and that it can seriously aid me when planning for filming videos as I know so much about the indie genre and that there is so many different angles in which I can approach the filming of a video that it is not that hard to be independent and unique.